Examples
End-to-end walkthrough of reviewing a landing page across multiple coaching disciplines.
Scenario: Reviewing a Landing Page Across Disciplines
You've just built a landing page for a new feature launch. Before going live, you want expert feedback across UX, copy, and accessibility — the three disciplines that make or break a landing page.
UX Coaching
/coaching:ux feature-launch-landing-pageReviews the landing page's user experience — information hierarchy, visual flow, interaction patterns, and conversion design.
Sample output snippet:
Score: 7/10 Strengths: Clear value proposition above the fold, strong visual hierarchy, CTA is prominent and benefit-oriented. Issues:
- Major: Social proof section is below the fold on mobile — 68% of visitors won't scroll that far. Move testimonials above the CTA.
- Minor: Three different button styles create visual inconsistency. Standardize to primary and secondary only. Suggestion: Add a "How it works" section with 3 steps between the hero and pricing — reduces cognitive load for complex products.
Copy Coaching
/coaching:copy feature-launch-landing-pageReviews the copy for clarity, persuasiveness, and brand voice alignment.
Sample output snippet:
Score: 6/10 Strengths: Headline is specific and benefit-focused. CTA copy uses action verbs. Issues:
- Major: Body copy averages 28 words per sentence — aim for 15-20. Readers scan, they don't read.
- Major: Features section describes what the product does, not why users should care. Reframe as benefits.
- Minor: "Leverage" and "utilize" are corporate jargon. Use "use" and "with." Suggestion: Replace "Our platform leverages AI to optimize your workflow" with "Ship 2x faster with AI that handles the busywork."
Accessibility Coaching
/coaching:a11y feature-launch-landing-pageReviews the page for accessibility barriers.
Sample output snippet:
Score: 5/10 Strengths: Heading hierarchy is correct (h1 → h2 → h3). Images have alt text. Issues:
- Critical: Pricing toggle (monthly/annual) is a custom div with no keyboard support and no ARIA role. Screen reader users can't switch plans.
- Major: Hero background video has no pause button and no
prefers-reduced-motioncheck.- Minor: "Learn more" links lack context — screen reader announces "Learn more, Learn more, Learn more." Add
aria-label="Learn more about [feature]".
What You End Up With
.metapowers/coaching/feature-launch-landing-page/
ux-review.md ← UX score, hierarchy issues, conversion suggestions
copy-review.md ← Copy score, clarity issues, rewrite suggestions
a11y-review.md ← A11y score, WCAG barriers, ARIA fix examplesThree expert perspectives on the same page — fixing the critical issues before launch means better conversion and fewer support tickets.