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Examples

End-to-end walkthrough of reviewing a landing page across multiple coaching disciplines.

Scenario: Reviewing a Landing Page Across Disciplines

You've just built a landing page for a new feature launch. Before going live, you want expert feedback across UX, copy, and accessibility — the three disciplines that make or break a landing page.

UX Coaching

/coaching:ux feature-launch-landing-page

Reviews the landing page's user experience — information hierarchy, visual flow, interaction patterns, and conversion design.

Sample output snippet:

Score: 7/10 Strengths: Clear value proposition above the fold, strong visual hierarchy, CTA is prominent and benefit-oriented. Issues:

  • Major: Social proof section is below the fold on mobile — 68% of visitors won't scroll that far. Move testimonials above the CTA.
  • Minor: Three different button styles create visual inconsistency. Standardize to primary and secondary only. Suggestion: Add a "How it works" section with 3 steps between the hero and pricing — reduces cognitive load for complex products.

Copy Coaching

/coaching:copy feature-launch-landing-page

Reviews the copy for clarity, persuasiveness, and brand voice alignment.

Sample output snippet:

Score: 6/10 Strengths: Headline is specific and benefit-focused. CTA copy uses action verbs. Issues:

  • Major: Body copy averages 28 words per sentence — aim for 15-20. Readers scan, they don't read.
  • Major: Features section describes what the product does, not why users should care. Reframe as benefits.
  • Minor: "Leverage" and "utilize" are corporate jargon. Use "use" and "with." Suggestion: Replace "Our platform leverages AI to optimize your workflow" with "Ship 2x faster with AI that handles the busywork."

Accessibility Coaching

/coaching:a11y feature-launch-landing-page

Reviews the page for accessibility barriers.

Sample output snippet:

Score: 5/10 Strengths: Heading hierarchy is correct (h1 → h2 → h3). Images have alt text. Issues:

  • Critical: Pricing toggle (monthly/annual) is a custom div with no keyboard support and no ARIA role. Screen reader users can't switch plans.
  • Major: Hero background video has no pause button and no prefers-reduced-motion check.
  • Minor: "Learn more" links lack context — screen reader announces "Learn more, Learn more, Learn more." Add aria-label="Learn more about [feature]".

What You End Up With

.metapowers/coaching/feature-launch-landing-page/
  ux-review.md       ← UX score, hierarchy issues, conversion suggestions
  copy-review.md     ← Copy score, clarity issues, rewrite suggestions
  a11y-review.md     ← A11y score, WCAG barriers, ARIA fix examples

Three expert perspectives on the same page — fixing the critical issues before launch means better conversion and fewer support tickets.

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